The Second Writing of (Dividing and Classifying)

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Draft of “Typical of Boyfriend that I admire”

Diligent
-hardworking
-punctual
-finishing anything before due date

Attractive
-doesn’t mean that having a pleasing appearance only but mostly how the way he behaves
-dark skin
-sweet smile
-Bright
-humorous

Romantic
- is able to play an instrument and sing some songs
-give a little sweet surprise
-accompanied me to see nightfall, star and moon
-know what I love without asking to me

“Typical of Boyfriend that I admire”

                Every girl has their own ideal typical of boyfriend and so do I. Typical of boyfriend that I admire are diligent, attractive and romantic. First of all, what I mean by a diligent guy is someone who is hard-working in doing his assignments by himself. Also a punctual guy who is able comes on time and finishes anything before due date. The second characteristic that I admire is attractive guy. Attractive doesn’t mean that he should have a pleasing appearance only but mostly to the ways how he behaves. For instance, politeness is important thing for me. Also, a guy who has dark skin and sweet smile can attract my attention staring at him. The third and the most I admire is a romantic guy. A guy who is able plays an instrument and sings a song at the same time. For example is a guy who is willing to sing one of Westlife’s song entitled ‘I Lay My Love on You” at beach for me when the sun goes down. It will be sweet as sweet as honey.

Writing ( Dividing and Classifying)

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Draft of “Typical of Student in Making Assignment”

Diligent
-hard effort
-make the assignment immediately after it is given
Lazy
-less effort
-make the assignment two or one day before the deadline
Dead liner
-the most less effort
-make the assignment three or two hours before it should be submitted

  “Typical of Student in Making Assignment”

            As a student, perhaps all of us have realized typical of students in making their assignment very well. There are three typical that we could mention. First of all is a diligent student. Diligent students will do their best on making the assignment by the hardest effort that they can try. Also, they usually do their assignment immediately after it is given by the teacher at school. Thus, their assignments have done several days before deadline. The second typical is a lazy student. Lazy students won’t sacrifice lot of their effort in making their assignment. Less effort is done by them in it. In the same way, this typical of student delays the assignments for many days and eventually make the assignment just a day before it should be submitted. The last and most awful is dead liner students. They usually cheat or copy their friend’s assignment without thinking anything in one hour or even several minutes before it should be submitted. They even make the assignment without any effort in the end.

Writing Assignment (Comparing or Contrasting)

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Draft of Metropop Novel versus History Handout
What do we feel when we are reading

1. Metropop Novel: Interested
2. History Handout: Bored

How our understanding is

1. Metropop Novel: Easy in understanding
2. History Handout: Hard in understanding

Senses that we felt while reading

1. Metropop Novel: Various sense
2. History Handout: Serious sense

Metropop Novel versus History Handout

                As a reader who has read both metropop novel and history handout, I have found some differences while reading both of them. First of all, I am interested so much while reading metropop novel. I can’t stop opening the next pages. It is a compulsive reading for me. I just can’t put it down. History handout, on the other hand, I don’t have any desire to read it. When I open the first page, I had been sleepy. I am easy getting bored when reading it and I just couldn’t get into it. Second, it is easy in understanding the flows of the novel. I can catch the whole story faster and able to tell the whole story fluently to my friend even by reading it once. In contrast, it is difficult for me to understand the history handout even by reading it for several times. It seems hard for me to get deep comprehension on it. Finally, metropop novel and history handout definitely have different senses while we were reading. Novel contains various senses that we could feel in it.  We could get various emotions here, not only sad but also frustrated, happy, serious, hopeful, energetic, cheerful, wonderful, awful, chilling, envy, angry and so forth. All of our emotions are invited to flows. However, while reading a history handout or handbook, does not create various sense of feeling. We have to read it seriously and keeping focus on it to get good enough comprehension.

Writing (Examining Cause and Effect)

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                         Several Reasons Why Some High School Graduates are Unable to Read

         There are several reasons why some high school graduates are unable to read. First of all, it is because of parents' failure. They do not have enough time to teach their children at home, even just to accompany their children in studying or helping them on making their homework. They are too busy with their carrier. Thus, there's no time for being together with their children. Second reason is failure of the schools. The school gives less attention to the student whose ability is lacking on reading. Also, there is no special treatment for them from the teacher. The teacher treat them in the same way as student who has good reading ability. The third and the final reason is failure of students themselves. They waste the learning process of reading when they are in elementary school by their ignorant attitude. When their friends study seriously, they do not pay attention to their teacher. Another thing, it is because of their laziness on reading practices or exercises. They are not willing to train their reading ability by finding any interesting materials by themselves.

A simple writing (Providing Example Paragraph)

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Draft of “An Extremely Lazy Brother”

• Always wakes up late in the morning
• Almost never studies, just plays game
• Always asks his sister to make his homework or seldom makes his homework by himself
• Takes a bath just once in a day
• He makes his assignment a day before it should be submitted

An Extremely Lazy Brother

            My brother, Gus Anom is extremely lazy. He always wakes up late in the morning. Actually he should wake up at 6 o’clock but he just does it when the clock pointed 7 o’clock. That is always success to make him coming to school late. In the other hands, he almost never studies. All day long he just spends his spare time for playing games. That is why he doesn’t have any time to reread the materials that has been given at school before. Also, when he has some homework, he just seldom makes it by himself. Gus Anom always asks me to make his homework and doesn’t want to know how the way to answer the questions. The other example that shows my brother laziness, he always makes his assignment a day before it should be submitted. That’s why he always does it in hurry which makes the result isn’t optimal. And the most surprisingly he usually takes a bath just once in a day. Actually he doesn’t take a bath before going to school but just takes a bath before he goes to sleep. What a lazy brother, Gus Anom is.

Prosperous Person and A Gang of Thieves (story)

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Note: all pictures were taken from internet.

One day my grandfather told a story to me. It was a funny and an interesting story that I ever heard. This is the story.

Rich Man

Long time ago, lived a billionaire named Pangabean. He was the richest man in Bali island. He had a lot of wealth. Not only had a lot of jewelry but also a lot of livestock. They were a cluster of diamonds, a flock of birds, a flock of sheep and etc. He was a famous person in his island. It was because of his wealth.

Friendship Without End

My Vocab Assignment on 3rd of June 2013

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             Long time ago, there were young rabbit and young fox who lived side by side in a jungle.They were in a good relationship. They lived harmony and in peace, without any fight. Each of their parents had died many years ago. They lived independently in their each cottage. The young and beautiful rabbit’s name is batty, meanwhile  the energetic and adorable fox’s name is foxy. Every morning they looked for their own food together in middle of the forest. Rabbit looked for some carrots and some other kinds of vegetable while fox hunted any prey.

My Autobiography (Writing Class)

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My Lovely Autobiography which I made when I am in the second semester of English Education Department

           On 31st of March 1994 a little girl who is named Ida Ayu Putu Puspawati was born to the earth. I was born in a little happy family as the first child of my parents, Mr. Ida Bagus Ketut Adnyana and Mrs. Ida Ayu Made Ayuni. I’m not the only child of my parents, I have two siblings. I have one younger sister who was born one year after me and one younger brother as the last child of my parents. I spent my childhood in a small village called Baha Village which is a part of Mengwi District, Badung Regency.